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My birthday party

2011级(5)班[毕业] 戴雪滢 2012-07-11 21:45 阅读(226) 评论(2) 英语作文

Today is my birthday.So I will have a party is for me.Today I will be busy.In the moring,I cleaning my home.After lunch,I will with my mother going to a supermarket buying some drinks and food.In the evening,I will having a birthday party.I think happy.

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教师:莫然 评论于 2012/8/9 22:55:12 
太多will的用法错误咯
教师:莫然 评论于 2012/8/9 22:54:43 
注意细节,有很多小错误哦~