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2011级(10)班[毕业] 曾凯恩 2012-07-23 14:56 阅读(227) 评论(1) 诗词鉴赏

                                         从黄土间发芽的小草,
                                         略有几滴小露珠,
                                        小草顽皮地一弹,
                                         小露珠飞到了天上,
                                         如那好动的孩子。
                                         那是嫩绿。
                                        
                                         池边的杨柳,
                                         稍有一层薄雾,
                                         杨柳舒适地伸了伸懒腰,
                                         雾散在池面,
                                         似初醒的天使。
                                         那是新绿。

                                         竹林边的湖水,
                                          隐约映着几株淡雅的竹,  
                                          湖水欢快的跳舞,
                                          淡雅的竹破成了碎片,
                                          如可爱的仙女。
                                          那是碧绿。

                                          啊!
                                          绿!
                                          是春属于你呢?
                                           还是你属于春呢?

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同学:赖亦敏 评论于 2012/8/10 12:01:26 
很好,全诗洋溢着一种青春的气息,充满活力,充满希望。