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My mother

2011级(5)班[毕业] 刘婧宇 2012-08-14 18:25 阅读(263) 评论(2) 英语作文
  My mother is a nurse.She works at hospital.She usually gets up at 6:30.And then,she eats breakfast at 6:45.At 8'o clock,It ia time for her to go to work.At noon,my mother has lunch at the hospital.She likes fish and tomatos.She often gose home at 6:30 p.m.She often feels tired.How busy she is !
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同学:刘婧宇 评论于 2012/8/16 15:39:17 
OK,thanks,I will change something.
教师:谢七妹 评论于 2012/8/16 12:55:42 
quite good! But some mistakes need to be corrected.
"at hospital, It ia time ...,tomatos..."