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My summer holiday

2011级(5)班[毕业] 陈婉静 2012-08-22 20:44 阅读(237) 评论(1) 英语作文
  In the summe holidayr, I did a lot of things. Sometimes went shoppingwithfriends. Also have to visit relatives. We are one family went to a travel.The summer holiday is happy. I love this summer holiday.
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教师:莫然 评论于 2012/8/29 19:09:41 
从sometimes 开始之后的2个句子都没有了主语哦!!!到底是谁去了逛街,谁去了亲戚家呢??