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This is me

2012级(7)班[毕业] 黎安淇 2012-09-21 23:46 阅读(331) 评论(4) 英语作文
作文概要:This is me
  Hello! Everyone! I'm Angel !  Chinese's name is Li Anqi.I'm a girl . I'm a student.I study in Shilong No.2 Middle School. I have long hair,big eyes , small nose and small mouth .I'm tall. My favourite colors are black and white . I like tomatoes and potatoes.  I have a good family. In my family, There are my parents and me. My parents love me very much. I love them, too. I like Chinese and
English. Because it is entertaining! I like the long jump. I like singing! I going to be a singer.
    This is me ! What about you ?
评论
 
同学:曹佳茵 评论于 2012/10/26 21:12:47 
写的不错! 
同学:黄志杰 评论于 2012/9/22 23:16:21 
写的不怎么样。没曹佳茵的超强作文猛!
教师:莫然 评论于 2012/9/22 9:21:35 
I have long hair,big eyes , (a)small nose and (a)small mouth .
作者回复:Thank you  Miss Mo   .   我会改正的