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2011级(11)班[毕业] 曾肇钧 2012-09-23 14:38 阅读(242) 评论(1) 英语作文

   Hello.I am zengzhaojun.I am sorry to hear that.You should have a healthy lifestyle .You should eat a lot vegetables help you to keep in good health. You must try to eat less meat. Don't get stressed out.It' not healthy.You should listen to music.Good healthy lifestyle helps you get good grades. I belive you will be healthy.

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教师:陈兰秀 评论于 2012/9/27 15:50:32 
Ok. 1.zengzhao jun should be Zeng Zhaojun.
      2.add' you often feel stressed out'after  I am sorry to hear that
      3.a lot should be a lot of
      4.It's not......