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My holiday

2011级（1）班[毕业] 廖宇蕾 2011-11-30 23:04 阅读(479) 评论(1) 英语作文

作文概要：主要描写了我的假期生活。

    I had a good holiday.
   I went to Beijing whit my parents.
I bought presents for my friends. We went to a park. We
saw many elephants,and we climebed a mountain. We ate
good food.We took many pictures.
   We were very happy.

教师：谢七妹评论于 2011/12/1 9:05:23: That's also a good composition. You tell about your holiday in the past tense with right grammar. But there are still a few spelling mistakes. I hope you and your classmates can find them out and correct them. Let's get improved together! 希望大家找出文章中的拼写错误并加以改正,共同提高!