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My family photo

2012级(8)班[毕业] 吴含雨 2012-10-19 22:17 阅读(272) 评论(1) 英语作文
       Hi! I'm Kathy, Here are two nice photo of my family, In the first photo are my grandparents, My grandpa is Jack, He is a worker, He likes reading newpapers at home. My gradma is Mary, She is a housewife, She likes watching TV.
       In the next photo are my parents, my brother and me , My father is Eric, He is a salesperson, He goes to work by car , He likes playing football, Mymother is Cherry, She is an accountant , She goes to work by car, too. My mother likes singing, My brother is 12 years old, He is a middle school student, He likes playing basketball. I'm 11, I'm young than my brother , I'm a middle school student , too. I like playing the piano. My brother and I go to school by bike.
        These are my family photos, What about you?
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教师:莫然 评论于 2012/10/20 13:44:54 
有不少小细节没有注意哦~~~
比如说第一行的 photos 和第二行的 He is a worker.