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2012级(12)班[毕业] 李颖琪 2012-11-09 22:46 阅读(222) 评论(1) 诗词鉴赏
My classroom is big.it's big and white.there are two boards,many desk andmany chair.seven fans,four windows.the winters on the wall
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同学:殷振忠 评论于 2012/11/9 23:02:37 
没有大写,"it's",   "many desk andmany chair"名词没有加复数形式.   "the winters on the wall"冬天在墙上???