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My parent

2012级(12)班[毕业] 高浩贤 2012-11-12 22:13 阅读(226) 评论(1) 诗词鉴赏

I love my parents,My father is doctor.My mother is teacher.My mother teaches Chinese in school.My father .My father is buyers, work in a hospita.My mother likrs reading book. My father likes watching TV at hone.My father watch TV every weekend. I love my parents.

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同学:范泳恩 评论于 2012/11/12 22:25:26 
题目是:my parents  因为你所说的是父母两人!第二行的那个my father. 可以去掉!hospita改为hospital.buyers是买家,怎么会在医院?My mother likrs reading book。是likes。请你再认真修改!