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2011级(12)班[毕业] 周颖诗 2011-12-06 17:39 阅读(293) 评论(4) 英语作文
                            My Friends Wanted      
       My name is Bill.I'm 13 years old. I'm a middle school student. My birthday is November 29th. I like sports.I like playing baskerball. I often play basketball with my friend on weekends.There  are 4 people in my family.  My father,mother,brother and me. My father is a policeman and my mother is a teacher, I like my family.
     Let's make friends.
     Please write soon.
                                                                                                                                                                                     Bill
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同学:陈铴艺 评论于 2011/12/6 22:00:52 
"There  are 4 people in my family"有错误哦!!
作者回复:我会更正的~我会继续努力~
教师:刘焕媚 评论于 2011/12/6 18:14:30 
You are the first one.
作者回复:谢谢老师的评论~我会继续努力~