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My Favourite sport

2012级(8)班[毕业] 王炜聪 2012-12-01 09:00 阅读(216) 评论(1) 英语作文
  Hello!I'm Mike.I am a boy. I am 12.My favourite sport is soccer.I play soccer is very well.
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教师:莫然 评论于 2012/12/1 12:07:13 
I play soccer is very well.改为:I play soccer very well. (play ... well 就够了,is纯属多余)