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My Pet

2010级(9)班[毕业] 叶钰滢 2013-01-22 17:22 阅读(180) 评论(1) 英语作文

   I have a dog.His nameis Diandian.Why?Because have many black circle on it.Diandian is very cute.He is very friendly.many kids like playing with him.He favorite food is meat bones,he likes doll is ball.He likes running with me,he runs very fast.He has a beast friend,She is Nana.She has black circle too.Diandian,it's my good friend.I love him very much

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教师:黄翠乔 评论于 2013/1/22 18:27:37 
Becasue he has many black circles. / He favorite food改为his favorite food./   He has a best friend.  
Girl, be more careful next time. There are a few mistakes in it. Anyway, it's lovely.