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My birthday

2011级(2)班[毕业] 李佩珊 2011-12-09 22:18 阅读(245) 评论(1) 英语作文
作文概要:我的生日,真巧,恰好是我们去秋游的那一天噢!
  My birthday is on October 17 of the lunar Calendar.This year on my birthday,I go out with my classmates and teachers.We go to the eastern overseas Chinese twon.I buy a toy.It's nice.I like it very much. In the evening,my father,mother,sister and I are go out to eat.Wow,it's so tasty.Oh!In my birthday,I am very happy! 
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教师:莫然 评论于 2011/12/9 22:28:43 
最后那几句,帮你改了吧:
We go out to eat dinner, and wow, the food is so tasty! All the things happened today just make me supper happy!