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（火眼金睛）Can you find the mistakes? Season 3

2011级（2）班[毕业] 莫莫 2011-12-09 23:00 阅读(398) 评论(8) 英语作文

作文概要：英语作文最难的地方在于，容易在同一个地方一错再错!!!

各位童鞋们，你们能帮忙找出下面句子中的错误么？？

记得把你找到的错误修改好，写在你的评论里哦~~~

Come and challenge yourself !!!

1. It's seven day don't go to school.

2. There is so nice and I want to have a fun.

3. I and my friends are play football.

4. We go to HK play and go to shopping.

5. I hope holiday tomorrow and I don't go to school.

同学：朱依利评论于 2012/7/26 13:41:38: 1.It's Sunday,so I don't go to shcool.
2.There's so nice so I want to have fun there.
3.My friends and I are playing football.
4.We go to HK to play and go shopping.
5.I hope tomorrow will be holiday because I don't go to school

同学：朱依利评论于 2012/3/18 14:50:34: 1.It's Sunday,so I don't go to shcool.
2. I want to have fun there because there is very nice.
3. I am playing football with my friends.
4.We play and go shopping in HK.
5.I hope tomorrow is holiday then I don't go to school

同学：朱依利评论于 2012/3/18 14:47:20: 1.It's Sunday,so I don't go to shcool.
2. I want to go there to have fun because there's very nice.
3.I am playing football with my friends.
4.We play and go shopping in HK.
5.I hope tomorrow is holiday then I don't go to school

同学：丁璇评论于 2012/2/8 20:16:42: 1.It's Sunday,so I don't go to shcool.
2.There's so nice that I want to (go there and) have fun.
3.My friends and I are playing football.
4.We go to HK to play and go shopping.
5.I expect tomorrow's holiday because I don't go to school.
作者回复：第2和5还可以再改改哦~~~继续加油啊~~~

同学：区子杰评论于 2011/12/13 13:11:59: 上面的是不是乱发啊，这是错句啊
（ 1、It's seven day ，I don't go to school
作者回复：拜托你看看作文概要里的说明啦！！！本来就是叫你找错误来着！！！！！！！！！！！

同学：梁伟颖评论于 2011/12/12 21:50:33: 写得很好！加油！希望你能写得更好！