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2011级(3)班[毕业] 陈钰 2011-12-10 10:37 阅读(246) 评论(1) 英语作文
I liked playing computer games,but my daddy was not happy because he thought it was not good for my study.Sometimes I felt I was not a free boy when my daddy was so strict with me,so I tried to talk to my daddy,and he said he was happy because I talked to him,and now he let me play games if I study well.From this,I understand a friendly talk can help people get along well.
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教师:莫然 评论于 2011/12/10 10:44:45 
你的标题真奇怪... 内容倒是很完整。最后一句有一点点小瑕疵,其他都挺连贯的~~