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National Day

2011级(2)班[毕业] 李佩珊 2011-12-10 21:34 阅读(296) 评论(3) 英语作文
作文概要:我和家人一起度过了一个快乐的国庆!
  Today is National Day.I get up at 9:00.In the morning,my father,mother,sister and I go to the hotel.We eat many good.Wow,they're so tasty.In the afternoon,we go shopping.Then we go to the KFC.In the evening,I watch TV at home.I'm going to do homework tomorrow.I am happy.What about?Are you happy in the National Day,too?
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同学:梁伟颖 评论于 2011/12/12 21:50:16 
写得很好!加油!希望你能写得更好! 
教师:莫然 评论于 2011/12/11 0:07:23 
I eat many good things...
这些都是需要修改的地方咯~~
同学:莫莫 评论于 2011/12/10 23:54:35 
Good~~~ What about you? Are you happy on the National Day, too ?