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2011级（5）班[毕业] 曾露西 2011-12-02 21:34 阅读(505) 评论(4) 英语作文

作文概要：我的家庭有多少人，性格怎样，工作等

Hi, I'm Lucy. My family have four people. They are my mother,
my father, my brother and me.My mother is a waitress. She is thin and
kind. My father is a worker. He is tall and strong. My brother is a student.
He is short and funny. I love my family.

同学：叶俊豪评论于 2011/12/3 16:55:32: 我希望你可以加多一些对家人的描写，让这片文章更加体现出你对家人的喜爱

同学：冯子晋评论于 2011/12/3 12:06:07: 可以写上你的弟弟在哪里读书你的性格又如何

教师：莫然评论于 2011/12/2 22:36:51: 其实嘛...第二句的“My family have four people”我记得我们说过要改成：“There are 4 people in my family”的哦~~

同学：薛巧艳评论于 2011/12/2 22:07:54: 如果写上家人的爱好更好一些。如：My mother like read......