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A Funny Day

2011级(3)班[毕业] 张宇健 2013-07-21 17:38 阅读(163) 评论(8) 英语作文
July 21,2013,cloudy
It has been a week since the summer holiday started.Today afternoon,I went to the basketball court to practice shooting.At first I sat at the bench to watch the people who were playing basketball.Three quarters of the people were having matches.After a while,I started to practicing shooting.But no long,they invited me to have a match.While we were having the match,it rained!How frustrating it was!So I went home.On my half way home,it stopped raining.But I didn't to go back again.I thought the god must be kidding me!
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同学:黎达 评论于 2013/10/6 13:24:23 
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同学:黎达 评论于 2013/10/6 13:24:11 
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同学:黎达 评论于 2013/10/6 13:24:04 
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同学:黎达 评论于 2013/10/6 13:23:57 
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同学:黎达 评论于 2013/10/6 13:23:50 
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同学:陈美华 评论于 2013/8/24 18:39:17 
就看了这句...就去审核其他的了...剩下的自己改嘛 不能截图略肥娴-.-
同学:陈美华 评论于 2013/7/21 22:57:51 
the last sentence:“mush be”
作者回复:你都没有认真看过...我还有好多错