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2011级（1）班[毕业] 朱依利 2011-12-11 15:11 阅读(322) 评论(2) 英语作文

1. It's the seventh day of a week, we don't go to school.

2. There is so nice and I want to have a fun here.

3. I and my friends are playing football.

4. We go to HK and go shopping there.

5. I hope tomorrow is holiday and I don't go to school.

同学：朱依利评论于 2012/2/4 13:38:46: 1.Today is Saturday, I don't go to school. 2. I want to have a fun there because there is so nice. 3. I'm playing football with my friends. 4. We go to HK and go shopping there. 5. I hope tomorrow be holiday because I don't go to school.

教师：莫然评论于 2011/12/11 16:00:25: 呵呵~~重开了一篇文章来改错哦~~不错不错~~
不过只有第4句改对了，其他句子还是有错哦~~~
继续加油改吧~~