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My favorite day

2011级(5)班[毕业] 吕靖雯 2011-12-11 17:39 阅读(252) 评论(2) 英语作文
  My favorite day is my birthday.Because when I'am happy.At that day,my parents buy a gift for me.In the evening,I have a birthday party.Many friends go to my party play with
me.My mother make a big cake for me.We are sing and dance.When we are very happy.


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教师:莫然 评论于 2011/12/11 18:06:36 
We sing and dance~~ We are very happy!
作者回复:编辑不了啦~在这改吧:We sing and dance .We are very happy!【只能改这句哈,因为输入内容不能太多】