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I like doing sports

2011级(9)班[毕业] 赖亦敏 2011-12-12 23:02 阅读(388) 评论(3) 英语作文
Many people all like doing sports.Different peple like different sports.I like sports very much.Because doing sports is very important and very interesting.I like swimming.And I usually swim in summer.That is very fun.And I like playing badminton amd volleyball,too.I run every day.Sometimes,I play volleyball or badminton.If I do more sports every day,I will be stronger and healthier.
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教师:莫然 评论于 2011/12/16 22:15:04 
第一句的many和all重复了呢~~删掉一个就可以咯~~
教师:莫然 评论于 2011/12/16 22:15:04 
第一句的many和all重复了呢~~删掉一个就可以咯~~
教师:林密 评论于 2011/12/13 21:58:48 
Yes, you are right!Doing more sports is very good for you!