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this is me

2013级(9)班[毕业] 洪骥晋 2013-09-30 20:03 阅读(175) 评论(2) 英语作文
                                     This Is Me   
     Hello,I am a boy .I study in Class 3,Grade 1,Shilong No.2 Middle School.I am 13 years old.My last name is hong.Who am I?Do you know?Oh,yes!I am Hong Jijin.I have many hobbies:playing basketball,reading books,swimming and so on.They are so interesting.I usually go to school by bus.Because myhome is far from my school.I have many friends in my school.We have a good time every day.
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同学:林秋豪 评论于 2013/10/6 16:05:16 
不错!very good
同学:林诗雨 评论于 2013/10/4 14:15:22 
写得不错,巧妙地利用了设问句,用正确的语句写出了自己的爱好和平时是如何上学的,文中最后还表达了自己在学校每天都过得很开心,写得很好