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2013级(3)班[毕业] 黄天晴 2013-09-30 21:54 阅读(200) 评论(1) 英语作文
                                              This is me
   Hello!Friends
   My name's HuangTianqing.You can call me sunny.I'm from Dong Guan.DongGuan is a beautiful city.I'm a student.I'm study in Shi long No.2 middle school.I'm an active girl.I love English very much.Because it gives me a colorful drem.And English is very important today.My dream is to become a trabslater. Because I want to use my good English to introduce our great places to the English spoken people.
   This is me!
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同学:潘严冰 评论于 2013/10/1 13:19:11 
写的大致不错
缺点:现在进行时动词要加ing-----I'm study   Shilong Dongguan不要分开,地名都不能分开。trabslater错了,English spoken people.spoken改成speaking……
评价:你错误太多了,说不完啊!!!