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2013级（4）班[毕业] 廖熠程 2013-10-01 19:43 阅读(256) 评论(2) 英语作文

作文概要：my good friend Wenzhiqian

I have a good friend. His name is Wenzhiqian.He is a sun boy.He likes reading books.Look!He is on the there reading 《doupochangqiong》(斗破苍穹）It a cartoon.

But he don't likes playing sport

.Because his PE success（成绩）is not good

.I usually play computer withhim

.This is my good friend

.What about you

同学：潘严冰评论于 2013/10/3 9:10:34: It a cartoon错了，It改为It's或It is。

教师：张春苗评论于 2013/10/2 9:18:58: He is a sunny boy.He likes reading books.Look!He is reading Dou Po Chang Qiong. But he doesn't like sports. Because he is not good at playing spors.