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In National Day

2013级(3)班[毕业] 骆广迅 2013-10-02 13:27 阅读(256) 评论(1) 我的作文
作文概要:讲国庆节这一天我干的事
      In National day,we are very happy.In the morning,I sleep a long time.I'm get   up.Then I do homework.Why?Because we have a many homework.In the afternoon,I do homework too.It's very bored.In the evening,I have finished my homework.yaeh!Then I Go skating whit my uncle.Woo! There're so many people in the square.There is also ice skating.
   I had a good time.
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同学:张钊萍 评论于 2013/10/5 21:18:03 
第二行afternoon后面我觉得应该用句号隔开。写的还可以,加油。