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My parents

2013级(6)班[毕业] 林梓杭 2013-10-02 16:44 阅读(266) 评论(3) 英语作文
They are my parents .My father is anaccountant .He is tall and strong .He is 42years old .My mother is a salesperson .She is thin and smart .She is 38years old .They are my parents.who is your parents ?How old are they ?
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同学:金凤 评论于 2013/10/3 18:15:51 
內容太簡單,給讀者沒什麼感覺,應加多點內容,這樣才會使整篇文章生動起來,加油!
同学:张卓雅 评论于 2013/10/3 0:10:11 
教师:谢七妹 评论于 2013/10/2 17:09:03 
Good writing!