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My day

2013级(1)班[毕业] 黄泳浠 2013-10-03 11:52 阅读(193) 评论(7) 英语作文
Go to Qingyuan today. I'm going to morning playing there. I go hiking in the afternoon. Evening, I am going to write Chinese homework. Tomorrow morning, I plan to go home. I intend to go to the barbecue and classmates night.
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同学:王紫琦 评论于 2013/10/6 22:49:06 
不错
教师:谢七妹 评论于 2013/10/5 18:52:21 
麦苕琪的感叹句用得很准确哟
同学:陈伊婷 评论于 2013/10/5 18:05:08 
    呀学语你的这一天真是快乐呀!
同学:麦苕琪 评论于 2013/10/5 16:26:39 
What a happy day it is !
同学:黄俊淇 评论于 2013/10/5 15:00:04 
作文的内容写得不够全面,可以多写一点。题目也应该改成“My good day"
同学:肖雯雯 评论于 2013/10/5 14:10:52 
如果能适当描述一下你的心情就更了。It is  good!
教师:谢七妹 评论于 2013/10/4 9:57:38 
Really a funny day!