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2013级(4)班[毕业] 余家傲 2013-10-03 13:34 阅读(223) 评论(4) 作品转载
 Hello! My name is Helen Brown. I have a brother, Mike. My father is a doctor. My mother is a bus driver. They don’t work on Saturdays and Sundays. They like swimming on Sunday. They always like cooking, But Mike and I doesn’t like. We like play table tennis with our friends. We watch TV in the evening. Mike and I often listen to music. But my parents doesn’t like. They like reading book.
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同学:陈伟康 评论于 2013/10/7 16:19:52 
写得非常详细,不错,继续..                                             
同学:黄俊淇 评论于 2013/10/5 14:53:58 
写得很详细,介绍的人物也很到位
同学:田蕊 评论于 2013/10/4 12:24:27 
他介绍很详细,把家人,爱好,什么时间做什么都写的很好。
教师:谢七妹 评论于 2013/10/4 10:04:50 
Quite good!