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2013级(11)班[毕业] 金凤 2013-10-03 18:28 阅读(179) 评论(2) 英语作文
作文概要:你感受得到嗎??
   I'm studying in No.2 Middle School in DongGuan.My school is  beautiful.They are  a lot of grasses,flowers and trees.They are large playgroud in our school I am glad to study here. I love my school. Do you love my school?
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教师:谢七妹 评论于 2013/10/5 19:35:09 
教师:谢七妹 评论于 2013-10-5 19:29:39 
Yes, from your introduction, I can really feel its beauty of the school.
教师:谢七妹 评论于 2013/10/5 19:33:23 
"They are  a lot of grasses,flowers and trees.They are large playgroud in our school."
should be

" There is" 
and  "There is a "