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my weekend

2013级(1)班[毕业] 杨荔棋 2013-10-04 14:27 阅读(238) 评论(3) 英语作文
作文概要:my weekend
   Hello! I am Yang Liqi.I am 12 years old . Today is Saturday.I  went to the library read books on the Saturday morning. I went hiking with my parents on the Saturday afteernoon.I do my homework on Saturday evening.Sunday,I and my parents went to the guangzhou chimelong water park.There are a lot of things to play,such as the joy of the theatre major magic.acrobatics and exotic dance.There are auspi ciousfigures.We are very happy to play.Sunday evening,I watch TV with my parents.This is weekend we are very happy.                                                                                                                 What about you ?
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同学:黄天晴 评论于 2013/10/4 17:50:26 
怎么好像有点矛盾?你说,Today is Saturday.可是后面又用过去式!
作者回复:是老师说要用过去式,这一篇主要记述那天的事情,因此前面也要用过去时。全部用过去时,明白没有。
教师:谢七妹 评论于 2013/10/4 16:05:03 
Really a fun weekend!