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my good friend

2013级(1)班[毕业] 杨荔棋 2013-10-04 14:55 阅读(195) 评论(4) 英语作文
作文概要:my good friend
      Hello!I am Yang Liqi.I have a good friend .She is Wang Jingtong. She is 12.Me too! She was wearing a pair of glasses .Round eyes .High nose.cherry like face.She is four months older than me.She and I are very happy together.We go shopping,go to movies and go swimming.She takes good care of me,when I need , she always helps me .We help each other.She is studying in  Shilong ,too. I am in Class One ,Grade Seven. She is in Class Three Grade Seven. This is my friend .                                                                          What about you ?
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同学:田蕊 评论于 2013/10/4 19:25:35 
  写得好,用词准确。
同学:黄天晴 评论于 2013/10/4 17:48:12 
那里错了吧!应该是She is 12 too.
作者回复:这个没有错,也可以这样写的,意思一样,没有错,明白没有
教师:谢七妹 评论于 2013/10/4 15:47:49 
近乎完美的作文,太棒了!