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My family

2013级(11)班[毕业] 陈伊婷 2013-10-04 17:32 阅读(160) 评论(4) 英语作文
  I have a family.There are my father,my mother,my bather and my.My father likes reading book.He is tall and strong .My mother likes watching TV.She is very beautiful。She often go to work by car.My bather likes taking bike.I like taking bike,too.I often by bike withe my family.
   Look!This is my family.
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同学:黄俊淇 评论于 2013/10/5 15:32:27 
作文的整体写的不错,内容具体,但是文中有一些错误,应该好好检查
教师:谢七妹 评论于 2013/10/4 21:20:58 
My bather likes taking bikes.I like taking bikes,too.
教师:谢七妹 评论于 2013/10/4 21:20:07 
She often goes to work by car.
教师:谢七妹 评论于 2013/10/4 21:14:17 
写的不错,下次上传前能先检查再发表会更好.