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A happy day

2013级(8)班[毕业] 马楚滢 2013-10-04 18:35 阅读(169) 评论(2) 英语作文
I have a happy day .Today, I got up very early, I had a very good breakfast, then I went out to play with my friend, We had a very good time. In the afternoonI went go hiking with my
mother, it was very hot, but we felt very good in the parkAfter supper I began to do my homework, I didn't think it is difficult, so I finished it very early.Then I read some books and went to bed 


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教师:谢七妹 评论于 2013/10/4 21:54:03 
"I went go hiking with my
mother" should be "I went hiking with my
mother"
教师:谢七妹 评论于 2013/10/4 21:52:22 
Good! Really a happy day!