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My happy weekend

2013级(11)班[毕业] 田蕊 2013-10-04 18:44 阅读(273) 评论(3) 作品转载
  I got up early and went to school on Saturday morning.I was very excited.In the bus,we sing songs ang guessed puzzles.We were very happy.When we got to the xxx park,there were so many people there.We visited the forest,and then took a sky walk,enjoying the wind and the 
fog in the mountain.We were feeling very comfortable.In the afternoon, we had lunch and took many pictures.The scenery here was so beautiful.This was a wonderful trip.I love traveling very much.

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同学:杨杰 评论于 2013/10/5 19:14:17 
写了自己在周末的高兴,玩的很愉快喜欢周末,写的很好!!!
教师:谢七妹 评论于 2013/10/4 22:21:39 
"In the bus,we sing songs ang guessed puzzles." SHOULD BE "On the bus,we sang songs ang guessed puzzles.
教师:谢七妹 评论于 2013/10/4 22:20:09 
ALSO A GOOD ONE!