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2013级(3)班[毕业] 黄天晴 2013-10-04 20:09 阅读(166) 评论(2) 英语作文
ShiLong No.2 middle school is very big.I love it very much.There are many classrooms in it.And there is a canteen,a play ground and a gym.The playground is very big.We often play on the playground.And there are many trees and flowers beside the playground! I love my school!
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同学:张圣邦 评论于 2013/10/6 7:29:32 
好,写出了校园的景物和环境,但是第一句的middle school 的m和s要大写,要注意一点。
同学:简宇杭 评论于 2013/10/4 23:14:15 
"m"and"s"should be changed to "M"and"S"