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My mother

2013级(3)班[毕业] 黄天晴 2013-10-04 20:23 阅读(173) 评论(5) 英语作文
My mother is a beautiful woman.Her name's Ling.She is very kind.She's an accountant.She good at math.She likes listening to music very much.And she likes cooking.So,she cooks delicious. I think my mother is a superman.Because she can do every things.
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同学:张圣邦 评论于 2013/10/6 7:25:11 
好,写得真不错,写出了你妈妈的职业爱好和能干。
同学:李琳琳 评论于 2013/10/5 18:21:05 
写的挺好的,很详细的写出了你妈妈的喜好。
同学:孔梓君 评论于 2013/10/5 14:47:27 
挺好。。。。很详细,继续努力。。

同学:李嘉怡 评论于 2013/10/4 21:58:12 
Write well!But i don't like winter.It's too cold.I like summer best.But winter is fun,because in winter,we can play with snow.
同学:张一帆 评论于 2013/10/4 20:53:26 
恩,还可以。。。不过好像有几个单词错了。。。