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my room

2013级(1)班[毕业] 杨荔棋 2013-10-04 21:20 阅读(190) 评论(5) 英语作文
作文概要:my room
    I have a large room. It has a big window. There is a big bed, a bookcase and a wardrobe in it.  My computer is on the shelf. There is a trash bin behind the door of my. There are many beautiful dolls on my bed. The room with a lot of stickers, is very beautiful. I like a lot of books on the bookcase.  I read books every night .The bed is printed with a teddy bear Vigny pattern four piece suit. This bed in my room is very warm, lovely. When i was tired, I lay on it, which is so comfortable and soft. In the bed, there is a air conditioning. Open air conditioning in the  hot summer, cold, feel good; open air conditioning in the cold winter, warm, feel good,.This is my room.I like my room very much. Do you like my room?
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同学:杨杰 评论于 2013/10/5 19:22:43 
比前面的好多了
同学:杨杰 评论于 2013/10/5 19:22:32 
比前面的好多了
教师:谢七妹 评论于 2013/10/5 15:51:13 
你的写作能力越来越强了。
教师:谢七妹 评论于 2013/10/5 15:49:36 
There are 后接复数名词,window为房间密不可分的部分,最好用has,因此第二句最好改成:It has a big window. There is a big bed, a bookcase and a wardrobe in it. 
作者回复:谢谢,我会改的,让你们满意,