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My favourite season

2014级(10)班[毕业] 邱彬朋 2013-10-05 11:56 阅读(170) 评论(4) 英语作文
  Hello, my dear friends! What’s my favourite season? Let me tell you.My favourite season is spring. Spring is a lovely season, I think. There is a garden behind my house. In spring, the trees become green and the flowers give off fragrance. There are many butterflies and bees over the flowers. The butterflies are dancing and the bees are singing.  And what about your favourite season,can you tell me?
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同学:陈乐雯 评论于 2013/10/6 22:38:24 
用词用得很好,写得不错,继续加油吧。。。
同学:洪骥晋 评论于 2013/10/5 16:20:30 
描写气氛活跃,具有一定写作功底,不错不错
同学:孔梓君 评论于 2013/10/5 14:37:56 
嗯,挺好的。 语法用得好,篇幅够长,嗯。。。。继续写吧