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2013级（11）班[毕业] 金凤 2013-10-05 20:21 阅读(183) 评论(3) 英语作文

作文概要：這就是我。Do you want to know me ?

My name is JinFeng. I am 13 years. I am a middle school student. Sometimes I go to scool on foot.I'm a lively and outgoing girl. Usually I help my parents with their housework to relieve their burden. My hobbies singing, drawing,and playing the piano. What is your hobby? Do you want to know me?

教师：谢七妹评论于 2013/10/15 21:28:50: You are a good daughter of your parents, I think.

教师：谢七妹评论于 2013/10/15 21:28:48: You are a good daughter of your parents, I think.

同学：麦苕琪评论于 2013/10/5 20:24:17: 年龄那表达错误，应该是I am 13 years old