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My room

2013级(1)班[毕业] 麦苕琪 2013-10-05 20:57 阅读(170) 评论(2) 英语作文

                                                My room
  Look! This is my room. There are two beds, a desk, two chairs ,a window, a curtain,an air-condition , a light and some books in it.

  I love my room. because it is beautiful.
  Welcome to my room and play with me。

评论
 
同学:黄泳浠 评论于 2013/10/5 21:40:47 
"There are two beds, a desk, two chairs ,a window, a curtain,an air-condition , a light and some books in it."Here to write separate.Others are very good
同学:刘倪均 评论于 2013/10/5 21:06:58 
文章虽然简练,却富有感染力。并且没有错误,给了我们一个很好的启发。