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2013级（2）班[毕业] 叶俊锋 2013-10-05 23:48 阅读(135) 评论(5) 英语作文

Hello!I am boy. my name is Ye Junfeng.I am 12 years old.I am a middle student.I study No.2 Middle School.I have a good father . His name is Ye zhenhuan . He is chef . He is tall and heavy. He like watchs TV and playing basketball. This is my father.

教师：谢七妹评论于 2013/10/7 18:14:38: like后要接动名词,因此应说:He likes watching TV and playing basketbal.

同学：杨荔棋评论于 2013/10/6 12:33:55: He like watchs TV and playing basketbal watchs 写错了

同学：杨荔棋评论于 2013/10/6 12:33:52: He is tall and heavy heavy 不是这样写

同学：杨荔棋评论于 2013/10/6 12:33:40: He like watchs TV and playing basketball. like 没加es

同学：杨荔棋评论于 2013/10/6 12:33:30: my name is Ye Junfeng my没有大写 I am a middle student 没加school