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My pen pal

2013级（4）班[毕业] 张圣邦 2013-10-06 08:21 阅读(169) 评论(3) 英语作文

Jack is my pen pal. He is from China. He lives Dongguang. He is 12 years old. He is a student. He likes playing football and playing basketball. He goes to school on foot. Because his home is near the school. His father is an engineer. He goes to work by car. His mother is an accountant. She goes to work by bus. This is my pen pal. Do you want to be my pen pal?

同学：古永康评论于 2013/10/13 16:15:36: 没什么大的错误，语句十分通顺。

同学：姚嘉诚评论于 2013/10/7 22:04:10: His mot her is an accountant 中mot用错了应该是not,还有几个地方没加符号。

同学：李伟杰评论于 2013/10/6 15:13:32: He lives Dongguang里面加一个in会不会更好一些。