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This my bedroom

2013级（9）班[毕业] 胡斌 2013-10-06 10:40 阅读(152) 评论(3) 英语作文

I have a beautifully bedroom.My bedroom is not big and not small.I like it very much.They are a bed,a desk,two windows......in my bedroom.A basketball is behind the door.Three picture on the wall.Many books in the bookcase.Because I like read books.This is my bedroom.I like it very much.

同学：蔡腾飞评论于 2013/10/6 21:01:32: 你开头第一句写到了这时你精美的房间，可你后面没有写出你房间的精美。

同学：林秋豪评论于 2013/10/6 15:52:02: They are用词不恰当，应该用There is！应该是There are three pictures on the wall.Many books are in the bookcase.

同学：陈晓悦评论于 2013/10/6 12:56:08: There is a bed,a desk and two windows in my bedroom.改一改会好一点。