会员登录
用户名:
密  码:
 
 

my hometowm

2013级(4)班[毕业] 廖熠程 2013-10-06 22:18 阅读(158) 评论(2) 英语作文
作文概要:my hometowm
My hometowm(老家)in JiangXi province.That is a beautiful city.there are a lot of houses and trees.Although there is not bustling.But there have my relatives.When you into the city.You can see a lot of cows walk across the grass.And some boys are climbing the tree
Do you like my hometowm?If you like.Wellcome my hometowm.

评论
 
同学:王靖彤 评论于 2013/10/7 13:09:14 
“there are a lot of houses”没有大写, “Wellcome”错了。格式也不太对。
同学:熊柬舜 评论于 2013/10/7 10:49:59 
第三句话开头没有大写喔