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My summer holiday

2013级(1)班[毕业] 黄羽诗 2013-10-07 13:51 阅读(179) 评论(2) 英语作文
I had a happy summer vacation.I and my parends are went to Shen Zhen.
We are ate good food.We are took many pictures.Where we played of very happy.
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教师:谢七妹 评论于 2013/10/7 18:06:53 
最后一句不符合表达习惯,应改为:We had a great time there.
教师:谢七妹 评论于 2013/10/7 17:57:55 
请别随便加are,去掉are,过去时就用对了。