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2013级(9)班[毕业] 夏宗湘 2013-10-07 20:02 阅读(230) 评论(2) 我的作文
作文概要:作文概要:介绍我的家人和房间。


一(4)班 夏宗湘 2013-10-06 12:26 阅读(5) 评论(1) 英语作文

     My name is John.I am thirteen.I study in No.2 Middle School.I am in Class Four,Grade Seven.
     There are four people in my family.My father,my mother,my sister and I.My father and my mother are workers.I and my sister are students.We live in a small house.There is a room in my house.This is my room.There are three desks and five chairs and a bed in my room.I have a computer in my room.And a TV is on the desk.
     I have a happy family!
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教师:张春苗 评论于 2013/10/8 21:03:25 
I and my sister are students.应改为 My sister and I are students.

Well done!
教师:张春苗 评论于 2013/10/8 21:03:09 
I and my sister are students.应改为 My sister and I are students.

Well done!