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My room

2013级(4)班[毕业] 熊柬舜 2013-10-16 22:10 阅读(191) 评论(4) 英语作文
My room is small,but beautiful.There is a bed,a desk,a bookcase and a chair in my room.My room is very tidy.My schoolbag is on the chair.Many books are in the bookcase.The desk is in front of the bed.There is a lamp on the desk.There is magazine on the bed.Before sleep,I often read a magazine for a while.This is my room.
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同学:黄梓浩 评论于 2013/10/17 22:31:29 

第一句话“but beautiful”不用加上"it is"吗?
"but it's beautiful"。

同学:黄梓浩 评论于 2013/10/17 22:31:18 

第一句话“but beautiful”不用加上"it is"吗?
"but it's beautiful"。

同学:蔡腾飞 评论于 2013/10/16 22:24:48 
感觉有点奇怪,介绍自己房间怎么写到你睡前要看一会杂志呢?
作者回复:加个Because会不会好点