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Peter's Day

2011级(3)班[毕业] 梁伟颖 2012-01-06 20:44 阅读(346) 评论(4) 英语作文
Hello, I'm peter. I usually get up at 6:00 am. I run at 6:30am.At 7:10am. I eat breakfast. Then, At 8:00am. I go to school. I go home at 4:25 pm. At 5:30 pm, I do homework. At 7:15 pm, I eat dinner. At 9:30 pm. I go to bed. I have a good day. 
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同学:廖家民 评论于 2012/5/26 13:25:24 
文章围绕着主题去写,写得很好!加油!希望你能写得更好!
同学:刘尚铭 评论于 2012/3/25 11:09:13 
过于简单,但是时间明了,形式方面用的很准确。
同学:刘尚铭 评论于 2012/3/7 15:33:11 
Good, the time arranges very well!
同学:陈丰慧 评论于 2012/2/10 12:11:38