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2010级(9)班[毕业] 陈泽森 2011-12-03 10:26 阅读(424) 评论(1) 英语作文

  Different people have different hobbies.Some one likes reading.someone like swimming and someone like collecting stamp.

 I like play basketball. Sometimes friend invite me play basketball together in basketball court.I felt interesting.Second I like reading beacuse reading book can make me know many knowledge. Third,I like playing tabletennis.Because I can become happy.Fourth,Ilike wathing TV.It make me enjoy~~~

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同学:程相宜 评论于 2011/12/3 10:42:40 
collecting stamp的stamp要加s.play basketball的play要加ing.friend最好加s."felt"哪来的过去式??"Second"都没有first哪来的second?knowledge明明不可数为什么用many?It make me enjoy的make要加s!!!到底有没有检查就上传了???